Wearing a darker coat comes the night
Upon choosing to clasp, it starts appearing bright
Every night i die… in d arms of fearless night…
Lost in d oneness… I see the soul…
flying like a kite…
It wanted be free… like nowhere to go..
None to see and nothing to show..
Companions they are…. of Timeless boundaries…
The sheer beauty of Zero…
and the purity of Soul…
The dawn then unfolds a whole new world…
Is it really new or its the magic of rejuvenated soul…
After reading these stupendous lines, my mystic streaks gets a fascinating spark n really feels like drowning in the ocean of mysticism….way to go baby, keep writing like this n very soon you will have a b’ful knack of it….n d pic u hv added with it is simply out f dis world…….kp up d gud work!
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Poonam.....
i love this.....this is ur best post...!!!!! <3
ReplyDeleteReally awesome...!!! Very good food for thought and an Amazing peace of Art... what an imagination!!
ReplyDeleteAmazing Tejal...i didn't know there's a budding poet in our family...the use of metaphor (in kite) is superb...keep up the good work and u never know when we might see a collection of ur poems...
ReplyDeletePoonam & Rashmi Di - Thank you soo much ! It indeed motivates me.. however let me honest wid you... its not that i write often... ! Its just somtimes somthin comes just like a flow... and i try to pen it down... :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat i can just hope is.... let God be kind and continue to shower his blessings... :-)
thanks you so much again.
Apu dear - Thank you so much for being with me... :-) i am happpy that you loved it !!
@ Slyfe - thank you so much ! However I didnt get ya... !
ReplyDeleteI will appreciate if you could pls disclose your identity...
thanx
Awesome :)
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